Saturday, June 13, 2009

TASK 4

The POV of the wolf


A big ugly black wolf I am. I’ve have been living in the woods for quite a while. I have been having great amount of sleep everyday. Every night, before I sleep, I looked at the sky and watched blazing stars. And I thank god for giving me all this luxury. A great place to sleep, to eat and, to have fun all day long. A great environment.

But one day, when I was sleeping. I heard noise created by a girl wearing a hood. It was such an annoyance but I did nothing because I know that humans are obedient and they know animal’s feelings. But it just got bad to worst. I was already angry when she made irritating noises but she added the fuel to the fire by destroying my foods which I planned to eat for breakfast.

So I went to her and asked her where is she heading to. She is heading to her grandma’s house just at the other side of the hill. As she was in a hurry, she then ran down the hill and went to the grandma’s house. I have to stop her. I can’t let her be like that. She will make more noise. So, I took a shortcut and went to grandma’s house before she does. When I knock at the door and when grandma open it, I immediately, ate her up, wore her costumes and pretended to be grandma by lying on the bed.


Everything exciting happened when I was pretending to be grandma. When she came, she was shocked to see me. She told me about how big I was and how big my ears and eyes was. She brought me food and she fed me. I take really good care of me. I suddenly found out that she was quite friendly after all. So, I decided not to eat her. But I’m afraid to confess to her that I ate her grandma. I was scared. So, without a choice, I have to eat her.

So, I ate her. I jumped out from my bed and gave her a fright. She then ran out and shouted for help. Luckily, a hunter in the woods heard her and begin to help her. He took out his axe and executed me. Then everybody was safe and they lived happily ever after, except for me.

So, here I am now, in heaven, having the time of my life. But deep down in my heart, I won’t forget the awful mistake I’ve made that cause my death. I hope that little red riding hood will have a great life and hope that she won’t make annoyance in the woods. For all animals in the woods, this is a great lesson for all of you. :]

Saturday, June 6, 2009

CONFESSION OF A PRISONER...

TASK 3

I was lying on the bed in the prison, feeling devastated. Tears from my swelled eyes flooded the room. The whole room is filled with sadness. Photos of my love ones are all lying on the floor. Some are badly torn. It’s very tearful to have a glance on those photos. I’ve lost them, forever. I’ve lost my family, forever…

I worked as a cleaner at the airport. I earned $500 every month and I have to say that $500 per month is not enough for a man who is married with 4 children. My son, Aiman, is only 7 years old, while the rest are still an infant. My Wife, had a big responsibility in taking care of them. Me? I have to work every single day of my life to help them.

I still came to work even though I’m sick. But one day, I was terribly sick that I didn’t come to work for weeks.

“You are fired!’’ said the manager.

All hope was lost. My family was starving for months. We were like prisoners. How can I actually live like this? All we ate was bread with butter. I never had a good night sleep anymore. I always had a nightmare when I’m sleep. Even when I’m awake, It’s still a nightmare.

Everytime I went out to look for a job, I saw people all happy being together. I saw their joy, their love and care for each other. I love my family, and they love me too. But we just don’t seem to be happy.

One day, I asked my friend to help me to look for a job. They offered me a job. Selling pirated CDs. I will earn $1500 per month. Without thinking twice, I accept it.

So, I started selling it to hundreds of people. I earn a lot and thanks to my friend, my family financial problems improve dramatically. Everybody was delighted, my family and friends and even me. I thought this was some kind of a gift from god. So, I thanked him. I didn’t realize that this is just the beginning of the storm.

But, unfortunately, delight turned in despair. The storm begins. One day, when I was selling the CDs, I didn’t realize that I was selling it to a policemen. I was caught and brought to the police station. After hours of discussions, I was immediately sent to the prison. I was imprison for life.


So, here I am now, in jail. Tears rolled down to my cheeks from my teary eyes. I was crying continuously. I realized my stupid mistake. I shouldn’t have gotten that job. I forgave my family, my friends. But I just couldn’t forgive what I had done to my family. I won’t be able to see them ever again. So, I prayed to God to guide them in whatever problems they faced. This is my home now, and I treat it with love and care. Just like how I treat my family. Sometimes, at night before sleeping, I look a the beautiful sparkling stars. I wondered, will I be given a second chance ? …

Tuesday, June 2, 2009

TASK 2 !

(b) The room was badly decorated.


Just as I was about to open the wooden door, I knew right behind of the door is paradise. I knew that it will be nicely decorated. It will be the room that I have always dreamt of.
Unfortunately, to my astonishment, when I open the door, what I saw was hell. I dreamt of a room with walls beautifully painted and photos of our family being hanged instead I saw a room whereby the walls are not painted and there a crakes on the walls. Our family’s photos are all over the dusty floor. Some photos had been tore. I immediately banged the door and leave the house. My heart shattered in million pieces seeing all our sweet memories lying on the floor covered by dusts. I daresay the room was much worst then hell.



(e) She sat heart-broken on her bed.

Just came home from the funeral, Jane was lying on her bed, heartbroken. Her heart was torn into pieces when he blew his last breath. Her heart sank so deep when he said I love you for the last time ever. She had lost the guy who is always there for here. She had lost the guy who had showered her with his love and care. She had lost a guy that she really loved from the bottom of her heart. She had lost her most important person in her life. Her one true love, Raju.

Saturday, May 30, 2009

The best narative ever! xD

Trained hard, backed out from competition.


‘’Until you spread your wings, you’ll never know how far you can fly.’’ That is how my father motivated me. He knows my chances of getting into the team are slim and yet he still won’t give up. Just as all hopes of me getting into the national team are fading, he’s the one who will always be beside me, lifting me up when I’m down.

The straits times newspaper reads, ‘’ Singapore, in the world cup!’’ Everybody was stunned. Singapore, being the smallest country in the world, has made it into the biggest stage in sports event. The more people were stunned, chances of my dream of becoming a reality were high.

Representing my country in the world cup. That was my dream. That was every footballer’s dream. To achieve that will be difficult, but possible. So, I worked my socks off tirelessly in every training sessions. I put in my maximum effort in every drill that I do. Every single day is a challenge for me. I will train as if there is no tomorrow. I won’t fear people. Fear is never in my vocabulary. Passion and believing is the key to success and I’m convinced, I’ve gave everything I’ve got. The fate all lies in the coaches hand whether I’, in the team or not.

The day has come. The day where the coach will choose his 18-squad players for the upcoming tournament. I was shaking nervously. Stressed, pressurized. I could feel the weight to the world on my shoulders. 17 names had been called and now its down to the final slot. I had my finger crossed. Many questions were in my mind. Who will it be ?

‘’Aidil Iskandar .‘’

The coach had revealed the 18 players, it was a great moment for me. Nothing could describe my joy. Not even a thousand words. It was unbelievable. I was congratulated by many players and I truly feel that it was a deserving reward after all the hardwork I put in. The national team. The 18 player squad. Next objective, the World Cup.

‘’Majulah Singapura !’’ , that is what I hear when we enter the national stadium. Everyone was in high spirit, all pumped up, ready to kick their opponent’s butts.
The fans of red and white occupied the stadium. With pride, the nation roared together like lion while waiting for the game to start.I was in the dressing room, nervous. But hearing the lions roaring was such a confident boast. Never I thought that my dream is becoming a reality in minutes time.

Kick off was about to start. All 22 players were ready to play. As they entered the lion’s den, the stadium was fully surrounded by the lions. As I step in the lion’s den, the field, I knew that there’s no turning back. I will be in the field for 90mins. The 90 minutes of hell.

The first touch of the ball was taken, and every player was chasing for the ball. Me, too, was chasing for the ball. As the first few tackles came in, I knew this will be a war. It’s either do or die. I just did what I did best in every training to make sure we are in possession of the ball.

15 minutes had pass by, and still no goals. The fans was frustrated, even the players. Suddenly, I got the ball and I tried to give it a try. With full force, I strike the ball with my right foot. It hit the woodwork. But just as I was going for a rebound, a defender slide and gave me a two-footed tackle on my shin. I black out.

When I woke up, I found myself lying on the hospital ward.

‘’Where am I? ‘’ I asked the nurse.

‘’ You broke your leg into two parts.’’ The doctor said.

It was horrible. My dream, it’s ruined. I was destroyed. I couldn’t walk. Not even a few steps. To see people playing the beautiful game, having fun, really hurts me a lot. I guess, some dreams doesn’t always become a reality after all. But what pleased me the most is that I did persevere till the end. Although I didn’t achieve my dream, my father really help me in life. I did what he always want me to do. He wants me to try :]

Tuesday, May 26, 2009

hi. wait for june for more.